帮我检查一下, 英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.

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Hi guys,
That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework), and please tell me any mistakes that you found. Thank you very much!!
Hi, I am of great honour to stand here and introduce myself to you, My name is Junting Pan, I am currently a senior student at Maragall High School. My major is technology and I will receive my High School diploma after my graduation in June. I born in China, and I have been in Spain for many years, that means I can speak fluently Chinese, Spanish and Catalan. I passed the B2 of CEF exams in EOI, so I can also speak q English. I am seeking for a job for an Spanish(or Catalan)-Chinese interpreter.
I have worked as a interpreter in an law office during the summer holidays. It was challenging and I was work under a lot of pressure because the office was always very busy. I learned about the importance of good service, and working in different situation and also resolve different problems quickly.
I would like to offer to work on probation for a week, to show you my working actittud and translation capabilities, and I think I can do the job well if I can work for your office, as I always work hard in my work.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview. and please contact me via email anytime. Thank you for your consideration.

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千问 | 2011-3-11 15:36:16 | 显示全部楼层
那个,楼主,本人英语水平也就那么回事,说几个我觉得有点问题的地方,楼主瞅瞅,自我感觉良好的话就无视我吧。第二段 第三排I born in China 貌似少了个be动词 I WAS born in China 第三段 第一排 暑假期间我在一个律师事务所做翻译 这一句 这个动作在过去开始 也在过去就已经结束 所以本人认为应该在这里使用过去完成时 I had worked ……第三段 第一排 an law office 这里应该是a law office 第三段 第二排 I was work under a lot of pressure 一句 a lot of着重于强调物品的数量 比如许多人 a lof of people。这里楼主应
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